Hello friends!
Today my blog was treating itself
about an important photography in my life, and it will tell them the history
that existed behind.
Since they can see in the this
photography it is a question of a celebration, specifically the birthday of my mother.
In the way of the this photography she and the motive of union between my
sister and me. This photography was taken by my boyfriend.
With Katherinne we have a very
distant relation in occasions, and in the birthday I number 35 of our mother we
decide to join all our forces to make this moment special and unforgettable. We
did a few pretty invitations for all his friends, prepared rich food and did a
thematic party, all dresses of red or white and with floral necklaces.
In this photo there is reflected
all the effort that we did to do our very happy mother. And I feel that thanks
to everything what we made we since you relate also we were very happy.
There joined the fondness, the
love, the teamwork and the family. It is for these motives that I am charmed
with this photo.
That have a pretty week friends!
Fantastic moment dear, I can't believe your mother is so young!
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